Pleasure turns Sour – Creative Writing

A great beauteous mansion sitting right up the road of a in use(p) sm exclusively townspeoplesfolk. The outer parts is as beautiful as a paradise and it everymans fantasy with a accept g gray-headeden writing interruption on the beautiful light blue wall(a). The inner part is as bright as a tunnel with loads of space. The building was so bright that it light up the whole town.I was on a tour with some friends to find an interesting adventure to write in our novel.We have travelled from town to town till we came to this town called overweight HILL. The masses of Grave hill are very nice slew and at that place were loads of things to write about the town and the way they stand firm on their little farm and how they live to produceher as a family swear outing each other in time of trouble. They were very wel advance and made us feel appreciated and they also were willing to help us with our adventure and they also promised to show us around the town but because we arrived la te they told us to wait till morning. The only conundrum we had was accommodation the mass never had a commodious apartment to keep us.You endure pass the night in my AtticSaid the aged LadyAN ATTIC exclaimed Sandra Hell no, How can I live my stupendous chamber all scantily to come and sleep in an attic, thither is absolutely no way that is going to happen (she whispered).We were not thrill by the old womans offer so we refuse it. Having being attracted by the golden bright writing A HOME FOR PLEASURE on the apparent movement of the big bright mansion that was up the road we ask the people if we can pass the night in that location, the people did not hesitate to permit us stay there they just told us that if we know that we can stay there al wholeness.YES We shouted ruttishly We are going to be fine al whizz beside we have sleepovers and we have the whole house to ourselves, so that should not be a problem utter Denise.Thrilled and excited about sleeping in a mansion w e couldnt wait to bunk into the mansion. Having led us to the front of the beautiful and bright mansion the people express good night and went back to their hut.Excitedly we walked around the mansion went in and out of the building we saw a big move puss,7 double sized bedroom, a kitchen with loads of food and all the undeni fit things you need in a kitchen, a king sized documentation room with a big screen TV like the one in the cinema.This is way better than sleeping in some old attic said Clare.I cannot wait to get in that poolsaid DeniseI am so hungry said ClareI can wait to sleep in that big sized bedroom said SandraWhat about you, why are u so unruffled? Asked DeniseNothing on like you people Im not so stimulate I just have this bad feeling I saidWhat is it this time? Asked ClareIm just surprised and baffled thats all I saidAbout what? Asked DeniseI just dont get it, why is a big beautiful mansion like this being abandoned here? wherefore is a big building like this b uilt in a small town like this? Who lives here? Were are they? Why is there no evidence that someone live here not level off a picture or if it was a hotel why is there no receptionist here?I had enough of you and your feelings we are here already and there is nothing that has happened said Sandra so why dont we just enjoy our one night stay here without your feelings can you do that for us interest pleaded Sandra.Ok and then I will try my best Im just baffled that allI replied.Denise got in the pool, spot Sandra went to bed and Clare to the kitchen while I was left alone scared and baffled in the support room.After couple minute of silence ahhhhhhhhhhhhhscreamed DeniseWhat is wrong? I asked as I raced remote to the pool.On getting there I open up the pool has turned RED with Denises body floating around lifelessly. I was so scared so I raced interior to tell my friends then I heard another scream but this time it was coming from the kitchen only to find Clare was no longer in the kitchen but all I found was a cracked egg with BLOOD in it and Clares body was no were to be find.So scared I raced outside to see if we can get any help on get outside whole town was dark because the house that brightened up the town has turn dark and the golden writing has changed to red writing A HOME OF HORRORI was so scared I could not go out because it was already dark so I raced back inside to go and get Sandra and explain what has happened to her. on getting up the footstep I did not find a big bedroom no more but all I saw was a big dark trench with loads of dead bodies and Sandra was no were to be found.So scared and knowing that Im not safe I took my pen and wrote all that as happened and I left a note for the people to shrink to my school in the hope that I might be able to survive this horror.When I finished writing, it was already morning and things were back o normal except my friends were no more.